Ancillary: Teachers Feedback on Draft

Here is some feedback that I received from my teacher. She gave me advice on different things that I could tweak to bring it up to a higher level. I will take on what she said and make those changes!




Here are some points that were made on what I could improve:

• adjust text layout on the advertisement
• text on spin of digipak could be filled in to make it more easier to read
• possibly add quotation marks on the thank you message on the inside of the digipak