Today I received some more feedback on my draft from another one of my media teachers. Because she wasn't in college at the time, I emailed her yesterday about it. As she had a lot of feedback for me, she decided to call me and tell me about it and this is what she said:
Here is a summary of all of the changes she said I could make:
- try and make the outside and inside panel connect by using a similar colour palette (use a picture from the outside location)
- make the copyright information a little smaller
- change around the placement of the text and images on the advertisement
- reduce some of the writing by cutting some words
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