Production- Rough Cut Feedback

Based on the feedback given to us by our teacher and our classmates, what we need to do the most work on is the chorus part of the song -

What we have done: we only used two base tracks for the chorus and just alternated between them as we didn't have enough time to add more footage and edit it in time for the deadline

What we need to do:

• Use a wider variety of shots such as mid shots, close ups, even some cutaways
• The focus of the chorus will mainly be on the performance itself, so we will include more footage of Eva Ellis performing
• Include one than more location in that specific part 
• Make sure the lip-syncing is in time with the clips
• Make sure the clips we are using isn't of bad quality (i.e. shaky, out of focus etc) 
• Check that editing is in time with the rhythm of the song
• In terms of the whole music video, we will also use colour correction to make it seem more lively and vibrant, which should make the performance even more interesting to watch

Here is some more feedback recieved from one of our other teachers: